17 April 2012

Found Poetry?


There comes a time in every book’s life—every book that has been loved—that is, where decomposition becomes inevitable. And more frequent is the case when you own a classroom library where hordes of seventh graders teeming with pent up, book-destroying energy pillage and plunder because they don’t have access to many books at home, they’re too lazy to go to the library by themselves, or I just happen to have shelves of freaking awesome books. Remorsefully, I have to “put down” several books each year. And unfortunately, those put out to pasture are, more often than not, those that are in highest demand.

Most teachers would tearfully bury each work in the recycle bin, sigh, and mope for a day or two until the next book orders arrive. Not me. I like to make use of the remnants of the shredded pages. I use them to teach with: lessons on voice, imagery, dialogue; the list goes on. Recently, one of the ways I have used these adulterated pages is through found poetry. I first discovered found poetry in a teaching reading methods class several years ago (Thanks, Dr. G) and used it frequently when I first started teaching. Then someone (or lots of someones) in the lower grades abused this awesome technique until my students had been beaten to death with it (along with haiku, PowerPoint, DOL, etc.).

But found poetry is a chance for students to play. And I like to play. With words.

So, for those of you unfamiliar with this technique, let me quickly explain the steps.

1. Give the students a block of text from something already published. Novels with beautiful similes, metaphors, personification, and other rhetorical devices work wondrously well. I let them use a page from a novel (front and back).

2. Have them circle any and all cool words or phrases that stand out to them. They don’t have to be big words, just ones that pop off the page at them. Hint: pages with a lot of names are more difficult to use, as are tables of contents or other copyright pages.

3. Rewrite the list on a separate sheet of paper.

4. Rearrange the words and phrases to construct a poem with new meaning. Key: the new poem does NOT have to be similar to the content of the original page. In fact, it’s better if it doesn’t.

5. You can add small words, change tense or number, delete parts, whatever. Get the students to manipulate the words to make sense. Have them play with punctuation and form.

6. Add a thought-provoking title.

7. Share. Publish.

Below is an example I did in front of my 7th grade students yesterday. My words were found in Louis Sachar’s Holes (pgs. 85-86).

Original word list:
laughed
from a can
come to him next
didn’t even want it
trouble
sure to come back
unclear
spilled
after
it all happened very fast
sorry
approaching
wrong place
wrong time
bury
unthinkable
flies
unearthed
empty
stole

Here is what came from my excavation:

“Repentance”

it all
happened
fast—
wrong place,
wrong time—
unthinkable moment
approaching

sorry.

don’t
want trouble
to come back
thirsty

I’d like to see what you can do. Use my word list, or come up with one of your own. You don’t even have to obliterate a book to do it. Attach your creation here so I can share and you can say that you’ve published a poem. Maybe there will be prizes!

6 comments:

  1. Maybe you could try the newspaper? I have a free subscription to the SLTRIB and the DESNEWS.

    http://tylerducas.blogspot.com/2012/04/newspaper-blackout-poetry.html

    Here is my contribution. This is from a package of lotion.

    Here's my word list:

    active
    dry
    normal
    daily dose
    softer, smoother
    healthier-looking
    slight tingling sensation
    adapts
    experience
    delicate
    allow
    use sparingly
    maintain
    deliver
    protection
    gently
    dull
    reveal
    radiant
    all day
    alone
    under
    quickly
    reflect

    And my poem:

    I find
    I am experiencing a
    slight tingling sensation.

    Is this normal?

    I feel
    delicate,
    softer, smoother,
    even radiant.

    I used to feel alone and
    dull all day,
    but if I quickly reflect
    on you,
    my outlook is
    healthier-looking.

    I can maintain this
    only with a daily dose,
    used sparingly,
    or my protection will
    run dry.

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  2. Okay.. just for fun I decided to try it with this blog post.... :)

    Education

    In Haiku, teachers,
    Remorsefully beaten to death
    Using shredded pages
    Employ
    Reading Methods
    And Book destroying energy
    To pillage
    The student’s lower grades

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  3. Hey Joe,

    Great ideas. Thanks for your continued educational improvement ideas. This helped my squirrels to "see" poetry. Hope you and your family are good.

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  4. Here is my contribution. Words were found on a page from Zack's Lie by Roland Smith:

    Silently in the shadows
    looking back,
    An unpleasant memory remains.
    Moving into the light,
    I push forward.

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I think I'll post a little writing every so often...some polished...some rough. And I welcome any comments or criticisms or cupcakes you care to throw my way.